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Pr0fane
11-06-2005, 04:38 PM
Okay, I know I wrote this bit a while back and haven't done anything else since, but life just doesn't always allow the luxury of indulging in the little things we enjoy. Here is my piece again, with some small editing...as the smell of burnt oats wafts throughout my house.

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The lone rider slid from his mount in a single, practised move. He knew they were getting closer, could almost smell their heathen oils and unguents on the dusk breeze. With skill borne of years as a solitary hunter, he moved to the ridgeline on his belly. He removed the dust caps from the lenses of his long rifle and propped it between two convenient stones. Peering into the sight he could see their silhouettes on the horizon.

Deadly mistake to be moving on the high ground like that with the waning sun behind them. He counted four of the mutant creatures. Easy enough to drop all of them, if that was his plan. These ones, these Bolas, had limited range capability but nothing that could threaten his position. It was more important to remember that these were hunters for the aberration tribes. Always in packs, maybe they weren

gunslinger
11-08-2005, 04:01 PM
i have always liked this story.. the way the dragyri communicate especially.. even as a rerun it is still good.

now where is the rest dammit?

Philip7478
12-31-2005, 04:51 AM
i have always liked this story.

So this is what you meant by saying "story."?

gunslinger
01-03-2006, 05:44 PM
i have always liked this story.

So this is what you meant by saying "story."?

I am not sure what the hell that question is supposed to mean? wtf?

Pr0fane
01-03-2006, 05:51 PM
LOL. Ditto. I read the comment, scratched my weary noggin and promptly moved on.

Philip; if you'd like some kind of clarification or answer, please rephrase your -umm- question. :?:

Stunke
01-03-2006, 07:08 PM
You dudes need to do what I do.
Stop talking to the damned commercial robots!

:D

gunslinger
01-03-2006, 07:26 PM
i like a good scruff with a troller.. so bring 'em on...

Cain
01-10-2006, 08:10 AM
it makes me think that maybe, just maybe a strange peace could exist, but what fun would be right...

Stunke
01-17-2006, 10:10 AM
"The edge of a monofilament blade."

William Gibson, Neuromancer, if I remember correctly.

Pr0fane
01-17-2006, 11:51 AM
Hmm...not impossible. It has been a very long time since I read Neuromancer though. For some reason Stainless Steel Rat comes to mind when I replay the phrase.

Cain
01-17-2006, 08:23 PM
Did I say something wrong :?: What do you mean by - "The edge of a monofilament blade." William Gibson, Neuromancer.

Pr0fane
01-17-2006, 09:24 PM
No, you didn't say anything wrong, Cain.

Stunke was referring to a phrase I used. He was merely saying that he thinks it was a phrase used in a book by author William Gibson.

Nothing to do with your comment. :wink:

As to your comment though...peace hmm? Not where I was going, but an interesting thought nonetheless.

DA_Magpie
01-18-2006, 12:27 AM
Now that I like. Typical of those Skarrd to be causing all the trouble. :roll:
Always nice to see the Forsaken and Dragyri getting along for once

Cain
01-28-2006, 05:06 AM
Gills you say 8) I never got beyond their strange alien beauty...

xeoran
03-13-2006, 07:04 PM
This, this I like! :D
Very nice!

Pr0fane
03-13-2006, 07:22 PM
Well thanks xeoran, I'd actually forgotten about the tale of Stormcrow. Wish I had the time to fill out the story. Someday. ;)

Maybe after Evolution.

xeoran
03-13-2006, 07:36 PM
Well hopefully.... :D