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awakeneddragon
11-12-2005, 12:36 AM
Before there was a Dark Age, there was trouble brewing...








"So, what are you going to do?" Spike asked, leaning against the bio-display consoles, one of the new, engineered apples in his hand.

Que frowned. "What do you mean?"

Spike barked a laugh and waved the apple in the air extravagantly, taking in Que's stark lab, all displays and smoky windows with shadowy figures.

"I mean, the Sig's daughter is totally in love with you, man."

Que turned back to his read-out. Andromeda's lifesigns were unstable lately, with odd mental fluctuations, especially when conversation was in the room. Lately Que had been more quiet than usual in his own office.

"That's her problem then," he said in his gravely voice. Since being assigned to Attr something had been troubling his throat.

Que looked around the room, tagging the windows into flooded chambers mentally: Sebastian, Titan, Io, Andromeda, and Mercury. Something felt out of place today.

Spike was shaking his head, grinning his skeletal grin. "I don't think so. The Sig is already trying to find a way to get you off his rock."

Que shrugged. "He shouldn't have brought her here, and he knows it."

Spike laughed. "You are just too cool, Que," he said with resignation, and slipped into the co-pilot's seat.

Que slid his eyes across the boards. Sure enough, Andromeda was almost awake now. He thought about her constant dream-state, and realized that she recognized him: Her rhythms spiked whenever he spoke; became erratic when Spike did. He frowned.

"Spike, I'm really busy here--"

Spike snorted. "Yeah, yeah, the hotshot from the Coreplanets has spoken," he said, throwing up his hands. He rose to leave, the apple sitting on Que's highly polished counter.

"You shouldn't leave that here," Que said, eyeing Andromeda's life signs.

Spike was already out the pressurized door, exit security lights flashing, scanning, and electronically dissecting him. But his voice floated back, "Think of it as a gift to the untouchables in Bio-weapons, from us lowly slugs in Agriculture."

The door cycled shut and silence settled in the room.

Andromeda seemed to be waiting, her pulse steady now, in those moments before wakefulness. Que rose from his seat and walked to her window.

He leaned forward, careful not to touch the bulletproof glass. In the fluid he could make out her completed, naked form. Her body appeared almost armored, the chitin, crystalline growths erupting from her body actually gleaned from the alien, mineral wealth of Attr. It was through them that he achieved most of his analysis--the crystal had remarkable mental conductive properties. He postulated that, awake, Andromeda would be a powerful psychic as well.

He actually felt that the coils of superconductive metals and transmitting equipment were far more ugly on her.

"Bio-weapons," Que said to her sadly, not for the first time. He thought of his father, kind, laughing, a teacher and a soccer coach. "Would dad smile now at his serious boy?"

Andromeda had no answers, floating in chemical sleep.

She would be recycled soon, and Que frowned. He had grown and built others, but she had been the first woman, the Sig wanting to have more varied readings. The males had all proven too unstable. Andromeda had been a gem, but recent developments out of Mineralogy were making her obsolete before she was even done.

Rumor had it that funding was being cut in the Homeworlds, but Que didn't care. He was a Father, one of the few humans psycho-tecs cleared for the work of nurturing vat-children, the Neverborn. He frowned. His next psyche-eval would be soon, and he worried that he was, with the termination of Andromeda coming, going to fall prey to that syndrome that affected all the Fathers: He wanted his child to wake.

"But they won't let that happen, will they?" Que said, his voice cracking from illness and emotion.

An alarm went off at his panel, and he quickly took his seat, his eyes going first to Andromeda, and then, with surprise, sliding to Mercury.

"Son of a--"

Mercury was awake.

Vertigo Jones
11-12-2005, 09:50 AM
I really liked that. I'd been thinking about a post dark-age piece and reading that, I think I'll not bother :) Very smoothly written, my only criticism is that the very ending seemed a little rushed somehow.

Stunke
11-12-2005, 12:13 PM
See, Thats what I'm talking about.

Nice.

awakeneddragon
11-13-2005, 12:26 AM
"There's no smoking in here," Que said automatically as the stranger in the coat lit his cig.

Patch looked slowly up the short walls of the ruined room, his tall collar tickling his cheek in the caustic breeze. "The roof is gone. I can safely say we are outside, Doc."

Que walked to the far side of the room. "The chemicals we use are biologically active; the reagents, stimulants, and sedatives also react to heat. Thanks to the accident everything is mixed together. One ember could touch off the growth of a mutant, viral strain or create something else we couldn't deal with."

His body was soaked with the chemical cleaner from the emergency shower. He reeked of over-sweet cleanser that was supposed to smell like lavender sherbet.

With a smooth motion Patch flicked the cig up and out of the hole in the ceiling. "What exactly did you do here?" he said, wondering if his great boots were enough to keep his flesh away from the goo on the floor.

"Research," Que said shortly, running fingers through his wild hair. It had been a hell of a night. "Are you the company auditor?"

Patch smirked. "Don't get out much, do you, Doc? The company is gone. I'm a Coreworld Administration agent, a sheriff, if you like. This is a part of my beat."

"I don't understand," Que said, but he did.

"Which part?" Patch asked patiently.

"The company. It's gone?"

Patch nodded, carefully watching the scientist that didn't look like a scientist. Sure, the egghead had the crazy hair and was probably nuts, but he had the long, lean build of a runner. Dangerous eyes too, the kind with such screaming intensity that most people would have been nervous around him. Patch didn't like it. He wanted a cigarette.

"Yeah. As of O-8-thirty, local time, the Core officially seized the stewardship of Attr. You're out of the job, Doc."

But Que was already pacing the room again, careful to avoid looking into the shattered geo-chambers, and the tatters of flesh there.

"Eight-thirty? That's when Mercury woke up."

"Ah, a citizen excited about being liberated, no doubt."

"No."

Patch turned his head to give the Doc an ear. "I'm sorry?"

"They aren't citizens because their DNA is completely fabricated. They aren't even human."

Patch nodded towards Io's chamber. "Look human to me, and the technicality you were all running on here won't matter. If your boy survives out there, Core law is his buddy until he gives us a reason to bag is butt."

But Que was shaking his head. "Do you know what it was that we did here, sheriff?"

Patch shrugged. "Terraforming, cosmetic gene manipulation for the bored rich slugs, and bioweapons. We've been itching a lot about you lot."

"You don't understand," Que said, his voice cracking. "I was brought here to create psychic weapons, grow them out of alien rocks. The spec required living tissue, and so we did that. The results were extraordinary, and they weren't even conscious."

"Did you let them wake?"

"No!" Que said with frustration. "It wasn't part of the protocol, yet. We had no idea what the psychic rewiring we were doing would do to the psyche, so we kept them all asleep. I defended that claim because I had a different reason to worry."

"And that would be?" Patch asked, crossing his arms.

"The rock, some crystalline formation. Attr is probably encrusted with it. The psychic properties in it are extraordinary, and we made it walk and talk. Whatever happens to Mercury, it is what might happen to the planet, to the rest of us that worries me."

Patch eyed the dead bodies ripped apart around him. "Small words, Doc."

"Know what magic is, officer?"

Patch laughed. It was ridiculous, but the mad doctor was just staring at him with those overly intense eyes. It pissed him off quickly and the laugher died. He heard the approach of his staff, and the world returned to sanity.

"Magic, right. Well, I think I'm done here," Patch said as forensics arrived. "We'll just be carting the bodies off and doing our autopsies. Keep yourself available because you're a suspect, not that there's anywhere you can go, unless you've saved enough to get off this rock? No? Well, that's alright."

Patch tightened the buckles of his coat and turned on his heel to leave.

"I'm going to bring him back," Que said.

Patch slid an eye back along his high collar. "Who?"

"Mercury."

No one had seen it last night. No one would understand. The human mind was a powerful tool, and perhaps it was now unlocked with an alien key.

Patch blinked. "Do what you want with your science-fair projects, citizen, but keep it clean. We're watching you."

Que walked to the chemical shower again and pulled the chain, a newly generated batch of cleanser doused him, filling his nose with the smell of ascorbic sherbet. He stared at Andromeda's unbroken chamber, where he had stood defying Mercury.

"And you're coming with me."

Pr0fane
11-13-2005, 12:34 AM
Fan-tastic! I was gripped. Yep, I likey.

Cain
12-13-2005, 08:39 PM
Very nice work... I am finding the character Patch very interesting 8)

xeoran
03-13-2006, 07:42 PM
Very nice....great idea, so when do we see more? :wink:

awakeneddragon
03-13-2006, 11:19 PM
Welcome back, X

(^_ ^) Ah, another old face from the old forum? Very cool. If you ask Pr0fane, I'm sure he'll dig in the old archives for your old stuff, as he did for my Cleansing and Oathbreaker. Even if you feel it dated, a little update here and there will bring a nice post back for everyone to enjoy.

As for when I'll write more... I've stopped forum writing in the pursuit of my dream to become a professional writer. I write different stuff all the time, but always chip away at my novel (which, as of today, sits at over 200 pages--100 to go...). I'm sure all of us enjoy your positve comments about all of our writing, and I know the fiction will keep flowing (^_ -)b

I have stuff posted at other forums around the web, always under the same name. One of my favorites is here (http://forums.redspirepress.com/viewtopic.php?t=342).

Take care,

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xeoran
03-14-2006, 10:50 AM
Thanks a lot buddy! Profane has very kindly already sent me the old Asmodel stuff, maybe I'll clear it up and see if i can make something of it? Who knows?!
Pity you arent forum writing but i wish you best of luck with your novel! :D Hope it goes well!
Thanks for the link, just off to check it out!
Guy